Comments on: When the Reality in Your Story is a Fantasy World https://www.maureenbonatch.com/2017/03/reality-story-fantasy-world/ Stories with Hocus Pocus & All That Fri, 02 Jun 2017 08:30:52 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=7.1.3 By: When You Didn't Have Me at Hello - Author Maureen L. Bonatch https://www.maureenbonatch.com/2017/03/reality-story-fantasy-world/#comment-5265 Fri, 02 Jun 2017 08:30:52 +0000 https://www.maureenbonatch.com/?p=2538#comment-5265 […] talked about things that irritate me in a story before (like right here). Some other book peeves include having too much description, too perfect characters and the dumping […]

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By: Maureen L. Bonatch https://www.maureenbonatch.com/2017/03/reality-story-fantasy-world/#comment-4914 Sat, 04 Mar 2017 12:05:16 +0000 https://www.maureenbonatch.com/?p=2538#comment-4914 ]]> In reply to Kenzie Michaels.

Kenzie, thanks for visiting. I read all the Sweet Valley High books 😀

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By: Maureen L. Bonatch https://www.maureenbonatch.com/2017/03/reality-story-fantasy-world/#comment-4913 Sat, 04 Mar 2017 12:03:59 +0000 https://www.maureenbonatch.com/?p=2538#comment-4913 In reply to Heather Boyd.

Lol, I still read some YA too

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By: Heather Boyd https://www.maureenbonatch.com/2017/03/reality-story-fantasy-world/#comment-4912 Sat, 04 Mar 2017 08:34:27 +0000 https://www.maureenbonatch.com/?p=2538#comment-4912 I’m now thankful that the YA book phase came well after my high school years. I might never have survived. LOL

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By: Maureen L. Bonatch https://www.maureenbonatch.com/2017/03/reality-story-fantasy-world/#comment-4911 Fri, 03 Mar 2017 22:18:05 +0000 https://www.maureenbonatch.com/?p=2538#comment-4911 In reply to Ed Hoornaert.

Thanks for visiting, Ed. Scruff absolutely hates to wear a sweater or any clothing, lol.

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By: Ed Hoornaert https://www.maureenbonatch.com/2017/03/reality-story-fantasy-world/#comment-4910 Fri, 03 Mar 2017 21:34:50 +0000 https://www.maureenbonatch.com/?p=2538#comment-4910 Perfect people are boring. They don’t need anything or need to learn anything. I kind of wonder though, what’s wrong with “I’m going to put this sweater on you?” (Forgive my ignorance!) My MFRW.

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By: Kenzie Michaels https://www.maureenbonatch.com/2017/03/reality-story-fantasy-world/#comment-4909 Fri, 03 Mar 2017 15:27:32 +0000 https://www.maureenbonatch.com/?p=2538#comment-4909 Maybe it’s just me, but the YA books I read in jr high where they had ‘perfect teeth, hair, and body’ never bothered me; I always admired how their thought patterns/actions changed throughout the book, and they matured through those mistakes. I loved Sweet Valley High and other teen romances:)

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By: Maureen L. Bonatch https://www.maureenbonatch.com/2017/03/reality-story-fantasy-world/#comment-4908 Fri, 03 Mar 2017 14:48:02 +0000 https://www.maureenbonatch.com/?p=2538#comment-4908 In reply to Nicole Fitton.

I so agree, Nicole. Thanks so much for visiting!

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By: Nicole Fitton https://www.maureenbonatch.com/2017/03/reality-story-fantasy-world/#comment-4907 Fri, 03 Mar 2017 14:41:51 +0000 https://www.maureenbonatch.com/?p=2538#comment-4907 I too find the perfectly perfect too icky! I think it is the flaws that make us ‘perfectly unperfect’ and that is what makes us who we are. Making sure our characters have a large helping of imperfections is what makes them believable. Thanks for a great post 🙂

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